What's STOPPING This Pen From Being GREAT?

This is a perfect example of the difference between what makes a good pen and a GREAT pen.  Here we have the Asvine V169.  The first 6 minutes is the BASIC review, standard YADDA YADDA YADDA.  In the next part of the video, I treat it as if I'm signing off on the final product.  These are some of the simple differences that make an OK product a  GREAT product!  Easy to do, but easy not to do.

A few tweaks and attention to detail, and this pen would really level up!

0:00 Basic Review
5:45 The Real Review
6:55 Packaging & Documents
11:11 Printing info
12:25 Weight reduction
14:00 Disassembly and details
26:00 Final thoughts

Music: Tick Tock
Musician: Josh Woodward
URL: https://www.joshwoodward.com/
License: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/...

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