seriously, don't do these to your personal statement

So I've been doing this essay review since last year and many of you have gotten into the top unis (YAY!!). But these are some of the MOST COMMON mistakes I always comment on and give suggestions for people to improve upon.

I'm thinking of making this a series where I give more examples of how to convey your story better in your personal statement - let me know if you guys want this! :)

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Watch this first, I explained in detail how to approach your personal statement and shared mine too: My Cambridge MPhil (Masters) Personal...

For more things to avoid, check my Oxford PS (I didn't get into it and learned a lot from my own PS): My Oxford Personal Statement & Mistak...

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